Target Shot

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by hangman3745, Sep 30, 2008.

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What do you think?

  1. Awesome!

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  2. Great!

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  3. O.K.

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  1. hangman3745

    hangman3745 Forerunner
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    Target Shot
    !READ BEFORE POSTING!

    This map is a 2v2 map shaped like a target,with a round hallway and a center shaped like a "t".Alot of interlocking has been done to make the hallway,it's a little bumpy,but if you know,tell me a tip about making them straighter.Also please don't critizise my map,put a good compliment,you can tell me any flaws.I worked really hard on this map,so don't post if you dislike it.Also if you have a problem with the weapon placement,reply about it and I'll fix it later.Thanks and enjoy!

    Map Link:Bungie.net : Community : Forum Topic Listing : Forum Reply Listing

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    Base A
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    Side 1
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    Side 2
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    Middle
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  2. J A Y

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    It doesn't look to bad, a few things I suggest doing. On A and B side could you interlock the double boxes, it's not the most important thing though. I like the rounded feel, it hasn't been done much like this. The middle was a good idea because you always need a short cut. I am going to download and have a quick forge through and get back to you.
     
  3. hangman3745

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    thanks!
     
  4. El1te Shad0w

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    wow looks very good like jay said you need to interlock the double boxs and you might want to make a v2 and clean it up a bit but other than that i must say it looks good. 4/5
     
  5. De Wy El Ay En

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    wow, a very nice, clean interlocked map in my opinion, but its just for 2v2? i don't know but your screenshots make it look little large for 2v2. overall its very nice and well made. very nice job, 4/5
     
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  6. hangman3745

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    thanks for the comments
     
  7. Acosta02

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    Small maps? I love playing those! (I don't have to round up as many people!)


    I'll give it a download, then.
     
  8. Mace

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    pretty nice, interlocking could use some work
    to make the interlocks less bumpy and neater looking, try to line them up, and also make sure they are flat and pushed down
    i would really try to make the + in the middle neater, interlock the walls better, and make it flat, looks curved
     
  9. NinjaKiwi621

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    looks a bit sloppy at parts but i like the uniqueness of it. maybe make a version 2 of it and have more interlocking. other than that though, i think i would give it a 4/5 because the game plays nicely
     
  10. bobsagetismyhro

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    I like both of the bases. in my opinion, this looks like a fun, non-stop action map. However it does look a little sloppy, I would make a v2 and clean it up a bit. Overall good map!
     
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    The map looks good but maybe you could explain the layout a little bit more or even make a map showing it.
     
  12. EGP

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    I like the look of this map, I exspecially like the layout part of it, also this map would be a great map to play 2v2 on. Mostly yes because of the layout and interlocking. Also I like the aesthetics in this map too.

    good Job, I would work on making the floors a little bit smoother though.
     
  13. crazyzebu

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    I just love the layout of your map, it is very creative and should provide for some interesting gameplay. If you would like some help with the floor I could help you out. Just send a friend request to crazyzebu if you are interested. I really see potential in this map but the floor has gotta change. With some improvements I think this has the chance of a feature.
     
  14. hangman3745

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    thanks for the comments and i geuss ill send you a freind request
     
  15. crazyzebu

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    unfortunately I don't get my box back until the 18th =(. I really want to help though...
     
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    You know, the map looks very nice and interesting. Although some parts are sloppy and its obvious that you need to interlock. Interlocking makes your map look cleaner. I suggest you do that if you plan to make a v2 so it will be a nice and download worthy map.
     
  18. hangman3745

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    thanks for the comments
     
  19. J A Y

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    After my quick forge through, I must say this map has some great potential. You didn't mention that the whole map was floating. That gave it a good aesthetic touch when you are in the middle. The shotgun had a good respawn time.

    As I stated before I think you must interlock those double boxes at either base, this will make the gameplay a tad better. At the moment grenades can get caught and it will be bumpy.
     
  20. MLG_NaFy

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    O k

    O K could be a little bit more "Clean"
     

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