Mythic II Western Waters

[Arbr]

An Arbr Review:

Arbr reviews dont need to be taken seriously but will help you knwo what to fix if you want to fix up the map.


Major Flaws: FX- The fx seems ok but its kinda feels like i wanna leave the map.
FIRST TURN: i would suggest making it easyer to move around because I fell off about 10 times before i got into the place.
Last Turn: Its hard to see where to go if its turning or not. IDK how to fix it but i bet if you ask people they can help.

Minor Flaws: Tuning on this map is difficult so i would suggest grav lifts but i think you used them all.

Over all: this map needs some work and needs a little more merging just to make everything smooth.

Good things about this map: Underwater lights...

Your Grade:
Creative: 8/10
Playable :6/10
Fixing: 6/10
FX: 4/10
mangoose layout: 10/10
Overall grade: 6.5/10
Final thoughts: It needs some work but its a pritty good rollicoaster.

[PIZZA S4UC3]

Alright I'll do it!! (the lighting) (it isn't in a mean voice) I'll also see what I can do about some of the turns well until further notice the map has some flaws that have been pointed out. When I fix these flaws I'll post a replay and fix the link to the upgrade.

Originally Posted by x DREAM 76 x

You should have went with Juicy filter instead.

I tried that, and it didn't work... The idea is good but there are some parts that you can't see in and that would just make the map hard in a bad way.

[LivesOn]

Originally Posted by PIZZA S4UC3

Alright I'll do it!! (the lighting) (it isn't in a mean voice) I'll also see what I can do about some of the turns well until further notice the map has some flaws that have been pointed out. When I fix these flaws I'll post a replay and fix the link to the upgrade.



I tried that, and it didn't work... The idea is good but there are some parts that you can't see in and that would just make the map hard in a bad way.

Hey, I loved your map a lot so I decided to edit it. Of course, I haven't released it yet but I just wanted you to know that if you decide to edit the original to take a look at mine before you start so, if you want, you could start building off of my revision instead. Changes include:

• Added receiver nodes pointing out the correct direction for easier guidance.
• Added much more scenery (completely overloaded the map with it, looks much nicer)
• Added multiple shield doors for easier navigation
• Few other tweaks

[Over D 53]

Why do you call it a "Free er"? Oh and cool map and cool idea

[PIZZA S4UC3]

Originally Posted by Over D 53

Why do you call it a "Free er"? Oh and cool map and cool idea

Well as I stated in the post (above the picture) it is Freezer with out the "z" because the open box is blocking the "z". Thank you.

[EziODST101]

Ooh I like the underwater feature, never seen that before. 4.5/5