Basic Lap

[The Sandalot]

Hello Forgers Welcome To My Map.

My Map Consists On 1 Base Lap Nothing Special Now I'll Step By Step Guide You On My Map



Here You See Nothing Percisly My Point Now When You Begin The Race The Mongooses Are Not There.
In 10 Seconds You Will See A Yellow Custom Power Up Do No Pick It Up



In 20 Seconds You Will See Active Camo Now Don't Pick It Up The Camo Means Its Almost Ready To Race.




Now After 30 Seconds A Red One Appears Then In 10 Seconds The Mongooses Appear And Then You Get Ready To Race!





The First Jump Is The Time To Get Ready The First Jump Is Pretty Easy But You Can Fall Off And Fail Too.



After The Jump You See A Turn Quickly Turn And Then Its To Straight Race To The Big Lift!



Now Heres Where You Dash To The Big Lift It's The Only Time To Do A Sprint!



Heres The Last Curve Until The Big Lift!



Okay Now Heres The Big Lift.



A Close Up Of Me




As you Can See The Lift Takes You Through Several Placed Sheild Doors





Then You Fly By To The End.





Now Heres The Overview




http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3Us...ileid=57399800 For My Map

[I BlacKOu7 I]

Wow no offense man, but this is one of the worst tracks I have ever seen. Don't take this seriously because this is Forgehub, and what we do is post and rate maps.

First of all, your walls are obviously crooked and the whole track itself was not even planned well. Try to interlock some double boxes or some stuff for your track.

[penguin asassin]

wow i dont know what to say well i guess i just broke your map all you need to do is cut through the middle, so yeah make a better map, also fix the pics

[JessicaJones]

Very sloppy. The jump, you could turn the bridges over and make is more smooth and less sloppy, it looks kind of boring, and the last few screenshots don't work. 2/5. Sorry if wuz meen.

[evilution101]

pros-Start is creative with not having mongooses spwn untill 30 seconds.
cons-The track is completely breakable. There is absoulutly no interlocking which is pretty much a must need. Also, I only got to see the first ten pics cause the rest are broken. THe map also looks like it is sloppy. Some walls dont look strait and you were somewhat lazy in not putting 2 walls making it so you cant cheat.

Grading

Gameplay-3/5
Interlocking-0/5
Overall astetics-3/5
Post-2/5
Overall-2/5
Keep forging but try a little harder in your maps.

[vinco onmia]

This map seems to rely heavily on the honors system. No one who plays Halo tres understand what the honors system is because in spanish "h" is silent.

Personally i do not care for this map (from what i can see) because there is no difficult part that really makes people fight to gain the lead on the track. And fix pics

[HandiCappKill3r]

Some of your picture aren't working for me.For the map it looks ok but you should really start to interlock things to make it go smoother.You should add a little bit more idea into it to make it a whole lot better.Its still a good attempt though.Nice try man keep forging

[Bahh]

Welcome to ForgeHub!
It appears that you are unfamiliar with the standards of this site.

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Also, it appears you haven't a clue on how to embed screenshots; if so, please visit here. I know you posted screen shots, but please do so correctly.

As for the map: it seems extemely simple, and not much skill nor advanced forging techniques were included in this map. The layout seems sloppy and looks as if you spent under an hour in work.

[IrishBeast]

Looks to me like you need a appointment with the Forging 101 section! O.k this map is pretty basic, for just some friends. That is the first section of maps. Now i would like to see you step it up with your skills and ideas! Make an effort! Now you can upload pics so try to get all of them in next time.


-Irish

[D4ni3l G]

half your screenshots aren't working. i would fix this.

also the map. It is generally not up to standard. perhaps you could try to interlock and float objects? there are several useful guides on the site if you look in the forums, also take a look at other peoples racetracks and try to learn from them. for instance, i doubt you could get more than one person at a time over your "ramp" - try putting two together or even interlocking them.