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Originally Posted by IcedFrappuccino
That doesn't look to good. 3/5
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You should add constructive criticism. What you did there was tell him you don't like it, but not why. Then, in your next post you told him that he can't take criticism because he pointed out that just saying "it doesn't look good" is just mean. You also retorted saying he's a little kid. How could you possibly know? His post wasn't anything outrageously immature, and I really doubt that you took the time to click on his profile to find out his age. Both of your posts were immature, rude, and very unthoughtful. I don't see him sticking up for himself, so I will. You're being a bully and a mean inconsiderate person. Try to remember when you were new.
Now that I have that out of my system, my review. Welcome to forge hub by the way. I see you made a couple structures on this map. They're okay, but they need a bit more cover. You could easily pick off people on the base. Try to put those double boxes sticking up in the front. The back doesn't need cover because that's where the wall is. You also may want to add bridges that go around the map. An unwritten law with MLG style maps is that both bases are connected by two paths on the sides of the map. The floor also seems bare. Build smaller structures or add corner walls around there to add more cover. Make sure all the weapons are MLG rule abiding. You could look that up on Google. Add more spawn points too. 3/5 for trying, but it seems unfinished.
Edit: I was really expecting IcedFrappuccino to bad rep me, and of course he did. I really don't care though because I have enough good rep to put a few bullies in their places.