I dont want anyone to take this the wrong way, as it is your first map. i dont want you to take this as harsh, but rather as constructive criticism. i wouldnt say you ripped off duckhunt as much as you stopper forging halfway through. this map looks incredibly open and unfinished. the things you did build are lacking interlocking (a must) and dont seem like much fun. As it is your first map, i feel obligated to give some leeway. I think its decent for your first try, but try adding some more objects, and use some advanced forge techniques to improve the look and overall play of your maps. I passed on the download, but still keep forging and you are guaranteed to get things right over time.
R.I.P. Brad, you are forever missed.
*Bradley James Nowell*
(February 22, 1968 - May 25, 1996)
*Louie Dog*
(1989 - September 17, 2001)
SUBLIME, the music that lives FOREVER!
MY POSTED HALO MAPS:
Voltage v1 and v2
MY POSTED FC2 MAPS:
City Limits and Fort Shazer
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