Map Preview MLG Independence

[D4RK 3NCRYPT3R]

this is actually just a plan and i wanted some advice before i started to make it

here are the pics







PLEASE COMMENT!

[B3NW]

Looks really nice, I like the middle structure mostly but cant understand the base layout at all..

[D4RK 3NCRYPT3R]

Its pretty simple, a one floored afair. there is a set of stairs an a door you can use to get up.

[MeNaCe x TIGER]

That looks really good. I can't wait to see the actually outcome, and how it plays.

[Ladnil]

You've got a very interesting structure there, unfortunately you only have one interesting thing on the map. The rest of the map, particularly the walkway at the back wall, really needs some height variation to break LOS and provide more interesting gameplay. The long flat street from one end to the other will create boring gameplay. I say keep the angled wall structure and work on something for the other side, and you'll have a pretty good map on your hands, even if it is just another 2 base MLG foundry map.

[MultiLockOn]

Much to linear, it's almost like you thought of one neat structure and decided to build a map off of it. Come on now, do something creative! Bases are easy to toy with, try and thinking of something creative to do with 'em. Also, barriers aren't allowed in MLG.

[C0N741N3D]

Center looks like a perfect idea, but the bases are a littl simple and looks the same as all of the others. Love the centers as i said though, very great, hope it turns out that way.

[used man]

Originally Posted by Ladnil

You've got a very interesting structure there, unfortunately you only have one interesting thing on the map. The rest of the map, particularly the walkway at the back wall, really needs some height variation to break LOS and provide more interesting gameplay. The long flat street from one end to the other will create boring gameplay. I say keep the angled wall structure and work on something for the other side, and you'll have a pretty good map on your hands, even if it is just another 2 base MLG foundry map.

I would suggest you build a duplicate wall structure across from the first one. that would be substantially cooler and more unique
then the current setup

[Scobra]

I think you should mimic the structure in the last picture on the other side as well. It will look much nicer and provide more interesting gameplay. Other than that, the setup seems very nice. I really hope you follow through with creating this.

[CaptnSTFU]

Originally Posted by MultiLockOn

Much to linear, it's almost like you thought of one neat structure and decided to build a map off of it. Come on now, do something creative! Bases are easy to toy with, try and thinking of something creative to do with 'em. Also, barriers aren't allowed in MLG.

I thought they were if they are held down by weapon holders etc?

Anyway it looks like a good concept but like people above me said to plain oh jane for the rest of it.