I'm sticking with what I said on MSN, I don't think the 8 represents a B too well, but the rest is perfect in my opinion.
Well I wanted to keep it un-edited as most as possible and for the most part (in Leet) 8 does mean 'B'. However, to me it looks better now then have an edited 'B' on there making it look fake.
You should totally try to change the 8 to a B, a subtle manipulation like that won't make it look fake. If you do it right, it should look like the real picture.