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Originally Posted by Fbu
It feels like the sig is trying to get away from the feeling the photo gives, and it makes it too awkward. Hat seems to blue and stands out more that it feels like it should. Same with the blue text, it pops too much, I think it would look nicer if it was more integrated in the sig. So-Cal is fine though. Not digging the overlay on the shirt and over the building.
It has so much potential but I think you took it in another direction. I would try to keep the nostalgic feel of summer, and incorporate it more.
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alright, so tone it down, bring out the actual photograph more, and give it a summer time feel? sounds good, will update with v2.