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Sonnet 6-8


Sonnet 6

By Justin Flood

How Can i convey myself with other,
when they hear it they think im insane;
Twisted love some might say , but im still your lover,
I'll always be your wedded reign;
Great passion till death and beyond,
watching eyes and heavily protected;
Electrical voltage charged till klieg-on,
Shock through me, like a tower thats been erected.

Why do others want to say "Your not sane",
Oh i hope it doesn't rain.




Sonnet 7 "Fuck XY"

By Justin Flood

The sight and thoughts of another XY,
makes muscles rave with anger and jealousy;
If they think they can steal you away to other guys,
then there dead wrong, because murder is free;
Stab him with rusty knives and make him suffer,
laugh when his blood turns feral and black;
They live there lives a whole lot rougher,
just like a dying Sewer Rat.

She MINE and ill kill you if you take or hurt her here,
I swear to you that ill always protect you dear.





Sonnet 8

By Justin Flood

True love shows that life is true,
non-true love is fake;
Amber and I always knew,
we had true love even to the date;
hearts beat on a quicken pace,
Sparks fly when kisses don't miss;
Minds think just like if we're in a race,
True love isn't a risk, but its fake love that makes or break with a risk.

Time might be my enemy in this great fate at nine o' nine,
just know that you will always be mine.

*Knight Kninja fav <3*
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as i said, my fav is the last one.. OOH you made it shiny for me! lol.

anyways, once again, beautiful wording, it inspired me to begin the sonnet i was assigned for class (which, btw, i like writing, but prefer iambic pentameter, though without a set syllable scheme)

ive always liked your poems about love simply because they mean so much to you. they are full of meaning. i also like the second one as well lol, its kinda funny how scary it is.. but true

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^Thanks Ice and Pigglez (each made one sig, its in there)^
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