Sonnet 1

[Kidbomber]

Sonnet 1

- Justin Flood


Peering through the glass pane,
and seeing the distant view.
Everything from violence to pain and everything else in vain,
You saved my world and here is what ill do.

I write to you, to show I love you.
Sonnets, Love stories, Drawings and more,
what more could I want from you,
but to sit around and adore.

Busy highway, and starry mathematical night,
You plus me equal two.
Multiply by love and divided by lives,
All that means that will stick like super glue.

You just need to stand where you are dear,
I'll just smother you in love and emotional tears.

[Miraj]

dats friggin awesome... NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
if i was gay
i wud say
I love u

[Kidbomber]

Originally Posted by Miraj

dats friggin awesome... NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
if i was gay
i wud say
I love u

<3

flr

[EGP]

<3 for me too?

Im assuming that was for me :)
thank you so much

[Miraj]

Originally Posted by EGP

<3 for me too?

Im assuming that was for me :)
thank you so much

jealous much?
don't worry alex, i wasn't flirting, just appreciating his awesome work.

[Kidbomber]

Originally Posted by EGP

<3 for me too?

Im assuming that was for me :)
thank you so much

There you go <3

Originally Posted by Miraj

i wasn't flirting, just appreciating his awesome work.

awww i thought you were... :(

jk

Thanks for the comments though guys, means alot :D

[Gr4phix]

Amazing Poem KB. Line with "super glue" made me chuckle though xD. last line, where you say "Smoother you" isn't it smother? or am I just reading it wrong?

[Kidbomber]

Originally Posted by Gr4phix

Amazing Poem KB. Line with "super glue" made me chuckle though xD. last line, where you say "Smoother you" isn't it smother? or am I just reading it wrong?

tbh when i wrote it it was Smother, however when I typed it, the spell-check made smoother. So im not sure lol, but i do think it is smother so ill change it :P

[Gr4phix]

Originally Posted by Kidbomber

tbh when i wrote it it was Smother, however when I typed it, the spell-check made smoother. So im not sure lol, but i do think it is smother so ill change it :P

Lol, stupid Spell Check. Just wanted to point it out :D

[Knight Kninja]

jaw drop amazing!

To have someone save your world, to make you happy, to simply bring the joy of life back into you... is nigh impossible to express, and yet here you have done so in the first stanza. I kid you not, i am crying as i write this, for the same has happened to me, and your writings bring these emotions to life.

the second two stanzas had amazing rhythm to them. it almost felt like a song reading them. all i can say is wow.

Expression through words, words coming from love. this brings out the most powerful writings one could ever write. this is great, good job kb..

-knight