My first Animation/Manip

[Teerav11]

Hey guys this is my first animation and manip since it is a bit of both. Since it is my first you cant laugh unless you think its funny! lol anyways here it is:

[knight kninja]

k well first, you should have the spartan's head hit the ground instead of disappearing.

Also, the shot from the sniper looks screwed up. if you either tilted the sniper so that the shot looks normal or changed the shot and the head placement so the shot looked normal that would be good

good job though

[dontknowme42]

yeah thats the first thing i noticed was the perpective of the sniper bullet and you should narrow out the sniper trail and wht kk said wth the thing actually hitting the ground

and you should use spartan lazer and make em blow up get blood on screen