.Core Extensive Critique

[XX_Blivion]

oooo im next!!

[Dizfunky]

sexy or wut?

[Smeagle]

XX Blivion:

#1-First of all, you are getting much better. For some simple steps, move the render to the left a little to cover up some of the bright white on the BG. Secondly, add a light source to increase the feeling the render was on the BG already. Good text, but place it a little higher. Having text in the corner brings a little too much attention away from the focal. Smudging on the BG is good, but smudge the persons "wings" a little outwards. Just to make it blend a little more.

[ZCT]

whata bout me?...

[Smeagle]

You didnt post anything. You just said how bout it or something. You didnt state anything to be critiqued.

[XX_Blivion]

actually please do this one.. lol V5

[Smeagle]

Sorry, just take into consideration what I said earlier.

[ZCT]

Um i meant, would you critique the siggy...

[Smeagle]

Paranormal:

#1-There is some pretty good smudging here, but the tan color in the middle is a little too solid. Its kind of like he's against a solid object instead of a smudged BG. The gradient is kind of bad because the blur on the right seems like a cut-out of the BG. Its very easy to see the focal, and thats a good thing. But I think you should have blurred the edges of the render a little. This will add greatly to the smudged arms. Text is OK, but nothing special. Try placing the sub-text FF-XII In smaller letters below your name.

[Norlinsky]