Foundry Misery

[Crippled Hobo]

Very messy, but if you improve your skills then you could probably make something decent in the future because the layout is ok, i guess.....

[Urban Myth]

People like you are what's making this site go to shit. You get people who post a terrible map, and instead of telling them the truth and why its bad, people will just beat around the bush and not give criticism and be straightforward and say THIS IS BAD

Amen.

Anyway, the map looks like a good first map... ever. You have ok ideas for design but you need to learn more about things like interlcking and merging. Let me tell you though, don't feel bad when people start ranting about how bad the map is (It may get worse, trust me). Just start again after you learn more about forging, start fresh yknow.

[Dragull]

Feature now!!!11!!!1!!one!!1!

Ok, now seriously, first, its too crowded, delete all the barrels and some other stuff. Second, too many weapons (7 br and 6 smg?).
Third: Sentinel Beam is overpower.
Fourth: try better interlocking.

[mikelp]

Notice how many people have sarcastic replies after Titmar posted....

I would say that this map is pretty messy, you need to interlock walls and make the map neat. Also, you filled the rooms with too much...well... crap..... There is just a ton of junk lying around the hallways. Is that really necessary?

[AgileDan92]

Originally Posted by skillkill119

WTF? you say stuff like more propane tanks= more skill and weres the wraith the wraith whouldn't be able to go far on a small cluttered mao like this and just cause he doesn't have an exact number of wepons doesn't make it a bad map.
but (heres my review)
it sucks
if small random clutter was good i could take a sh&%@ and be god.
costem powerups are only good for sertain things so think before u put them on a map camo and overshilds are to easy to get through (not thinking of random clutter) and also on to that subject again i hate when noobs run away and random clutter can somtimes allow that. the little merging u did was actualy ok but other than that i whould not recomend a DL

Please, oh merciful God, please tell me that you can re-read that post and realize that it is SAR-CAS-TIC. He was obviously making fun of the poor map construction. And another thing: Please use Mozilla Firefox. It has an auto spell check when you are typing. We'd all benefit if you did that.

Now to my map-analysis: I personally think it needs a shield door over the overshield spawn so that nobody wants to camp there. Honestly, with a shotgun on the map, and a small area with an overshield, the only way to insure there is no camping is to close off the only entrance with a shield door.

And another thing, I don't see any soccer balls anywhere. Whats up with that?

And if there aren't any rockets on the map, I'll actually have to resort to using other weapons! How will I survive if I can't get a double kill with every shot? If I can't have rockets on the map, I'll have to resort to something else: The shotgun, a needler, or one of the THREE maulers. How could I ever get kills with those on a small map, especially one with so little cover?

It's ok though, cause I'm a beast with the sentinel beam.


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Ok, no offense to the maker of the map at all. That was just to out-sarcasm everyone else.

Just check out forging 101 please. You can do better.

[Chronic Fate]

This easily deserves a feature and the creator of this heaven-like clutter deserves to bare the might Recon Armour (Hallelujah).

There needs to be 5x as many barrels and fusion coils though and a truck placed directly in the middle would enhance this map's game play past god-like.
I'll be sure to download this map and recommend it to all of my friends. You, Creator, have just got a fan club. You get a 5.1/5!

Past all the sarcasm:

This map is an absolute mess and the game play would be hectic (which sometimes isn't a bad thing, but in your case....). I'd recommend Forging 101 and for you to practice forging. Good luck.... *cough*

1/5