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i really have to apologize, as i see nothing past average with this map whatsoever, and you cant lie to me and tell me the gameplay is good when there is one long curve that leaves any player stupid enough to walk it, to be terrorized by a single BR looking out. again i apologize, as you seem to be hit by forgehubs usual curse-over exageratingly friendly dults, who dont know a thing they say, like the ones who say the gameplay is good and the map is amazing so they can make someone else feel good. i suggest working on something with a little more scope. as you were obviously inspired by narrows(to my understanding more subconciously than conciously), keep in mind that it had 2 levels AND a man cannon, with the two levels not being visible to the other, in that looking over one, you could not see the other, and narrows had the ability of flow, as players could easily traverse from level to level, or be obvious and use the man cannon. another use that you need is walls, that stand for cover and closed areas that arent under the influence of 1 door, that leads to a room, with no other doors. this kills gameplay. with two strong people withBRs in the middle, the game is won as easily as that, this map is not amazing, and i apologize if you take this wrong but i say this with the most honest voice you can imagine, because your a beginning forger, and there are many flaws here. no more V's, ok, start on something knew. i will give you my final verdict, with no malicious intent whatsoever.
-a little sloppy(bases and ramps down to the curve)
-flawed gameplay (without even playing its extremely obvious that there is no flow, thus, poor gameplay)
-poor feedback (this has nothing to do with you, but bad luck. ask an admin and he will tell you the same)
if you want, ill give you help on your next map, as im a pretty defined forger.
my gamertag is MetalicSnakeX
Last edited by Metallic Snake; 06-05-2009 at 08:16 PM.
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