Overlook v2

[Boyle06]

some parts LOOK AMAZING LIKE 6/5 n other parts r 3/5... i dont like the bridges part doesnt look good... i really like this map tho 40 things thats cool it looks REALLY GOOD interlocking smooth... geomerging is straight layout is great.. cover is needed... n it looks really nice... but idl the bridges... but its a 5/5 i will rate

[JASONYO]

i really like ur layout. not even getting to the map yet. genius idea with ur weapon list. i might have to do the same for my upcoming map. and ur map looks really well geomerged. there r somethings that u could have saved time on and not done, but it just adds to the overall aesthetics

[God Of Forge]

You scared me for a second. I have a map with a similar name, and I thought someone stole it O_o. Anyway, this map has good potential, but needs more.

[Box Cat]

I love the map and it looks very well forged. BUT, I think that you should have mentioned that you used some of it from MLG Aplified.

[crazyzebu]

It looks like you really put a ton of effort into this map. You have used all the little forge cliche's and you have smoothly geomerged many objects. Those overlook thingies look really cool. I don't really like the layout but you must have worked your ass off to make this. I don't care what anyone says, I still think it is just a bit too open...

4.5/5 =)
you have mastered geomerging and interlocking!

[Huntar]

looks very clean and simple, and to me, those are the best maps:) i like the simplicity of this map. looks pretty fun. ill definitly dl and get back to you with a video or something. thankyou for posting this:) 4.5/5

[InSaNiTy 1993]

Originally Posted by Bahh M15

I love the map and it looks very well forged. BUT, I think that you should have mentioned that you used some of it from MLG Aplified.

maybe i didnt mention i used any parts because i didnt?

[Draw the Line]

Originally Posted by God Of Forge

You scared me for a second. I have a map with a similar name, and I thought someone stole it O_o. Anyway, this map has good potential, but needs more.

Map theft has all but disappeared thanks to Bungie's new forum system. People can't get large amounts of recognition for stealing someone's map anymore. And if it happened here, we'd know about it immediately.

Anyways, you have a great amount of potential here. Not many people post a map after 15 posts that uses advanced techniques like geo-merging. Your layout overall looks pretty solid, I'd expect one sided matches to be fun here. I'll have to see how well your spawn system works, as it can make or break a map....but it should be good for the most part.

All I can really say right now is keep forging. What you've done so far looks great. The geometrical layout is still "foundry-ish", so for your next map you should try to break away from the more boxy style of layouts. Check out some of the featured maps to see what I mean. I wouldn't be surprised if I saw one of your maps there eventually. Keep up the great work!

[InSaNiTy 1993]

Originally Posted by Draw the Line

Map theft has all but disappeared thanks to Bungie's new forum system. People can't get large amounts of recognition for stealing someone's map anymore. And if it happened here, we'd know about it immediately.

Anyways, you have a great amount of potential here. Not many people post a map after 15 posts that uses advanced techniques like geo-merging. Your layout overall looks pretty solid, I'd expect one sided matches to be fun here. I'll have to see how well your spawn system works, as it can make or break a map....but it should be good for the most part.

All I can really say right now is keep forging. What you've done so far looks great. The geometrical layout is still "foundry-ish", so for your next map you should try to break away from the more boxy style of layouts. Check out some of the featured maps to see what I mean. I wouldn't be surprised if I saw one of your maps there eventually. Keep up the great work!

if theres one thing im worried about its the spawns... if its not too much to ask, if theres something wrong, let me know because im trying to get better with em

thanks for the tips though, i really appreciate it

[Zombievillan]

This map looks pretty good. You definitly have great interlocking and merging ideas. like the dbl box in the corner up high and the stair ladder. you are a great forger but the map does seem pretty open, You say it isnt as open as it seems but it seems pretty well open. Everything looks so good though. all the ledges going around and the interlocked box towers, It is all very well interlocked. I give 4/5. Would be 5/5 if it werent so open. Dont hate me its just my opinion.