Babel

[Olaberas]

Originally Posted by Dante_Decem

Your interlocking looks like something I'd make. Try harder.

Good observation. I actually learned how to interlock a few days before I started this map. Even still, I feel it served it's purpose. Thanks for the comment.

[Speed-e-cake]

This map looks like it would play excellently but it's not very aesthetically pleasing, it's a great first map by far. A suggestion on to make it more aesthetically better would be to flip the closed double boxes over and interlock them so they're no bumps. Another good thing to do would be flip the bridges over as well (it makes it look smoother). 4/5

[Olaberas]

Originally Posted by Speed-e-cake

This map looks like it would play excellently but it's not very aesthetically pleasing, it's a great first map by far. A suggestion on to make it more aesthetically better would be to flip the closed double boxes over and interlock them so they're no bumps. Another good thing to do would be flip the bridges over as well (it makes it look smoother). 4/5

Good points. I weighed out how I wanted this to look and decided against interlocking absolutely every piece. The bridges are like that because there is a room underneath that I wanted to be darker shades (the bottom of the bridge).

[RadiantRain]

Well then, what exactly is this, I like the fact that you have an underground battlezone, but it looks messy on the outside. I don't really like that, sorry.

Suggestion: Try to build a level above the tunnels to remove them from sight,

[Commander Jako]

Looks really good and I completely understand your idea of the open space. One question, Are the Halls Closed off?

[Olaberas]

Originally Posted by Commander Jako

Looks really good and I completely understand your idea of the open space. One question, Are the Halls Closed off?

The first level is what I assume you are talking about, and the side closest to the start locations is a loop that intersects at sword and then continues out to the rear of each side.

[Olaberas]

Originally Posted by RadiantRain

Well then, what exactly is this, I like the fact that you have an underground battlezone, but it looks messy on the outside. I don't really like that, sorry.

Suggestion: Try to build a level above the tunnels to remove them from sight,

No apology needed. Advice and concerns are welcome. I wanted the tunnel to be as open as possible, so I sacrificed have the edges show a bit. I knew that I wanted three levels to this map, all with room to jump. Due to height restrictions, I couldn't "bury" the tunnel. I agree that it creates a little ascetic issue, but it is still very playable.

[sexy dude]

this is a very good map and a well cool post very well done

[Murdock Sampson]

wow it looks really nicely done. idk about the weapon set, but i'll judge after i play. 9/10 on the map

[BlueMasterChief]

look great, i like 4th pic then down alot =O 4/5