[sugaballa99]

DUNES

Here is my first map, Dunes.

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Author: sugaballa99
Supported Game types: Everything except Infection, VIP, juggernaut.
Recommended Game types : Slayer, Team Slayer, Capture the Flag, FFA
Recommended Number of Players :2-12

WEAPONS AND EQUIPMENT:

x1 Shotgun
x1 Rocker Launcher
x2 Plasma Rifle
x4 SMG
x1 Needler
x1 Regenerator
x2 Covenent Carbine
x3 Plasma Grenades
x2 Spike Grenades
x1 Bubble Shield
x8 Battle Rifles

DESCRIPTION:

Here is my first map Dunes, this map included interlocking, floating objects, tons of scenery. This map is very high paced and makes for good slayer and capture the flag. In the map each team starts at one base with 2 dunes in front, these dunes are slanted and you can walk up them. In between there is alot of cover with a few secret spots thrown in ( near the wall. ) KoTH and Capture the Flag are intense gametypes for this map as it is always high paced and the game doesn't end quickly. When i was testing it, there was to many open spaces, so i added many scenery for cover.


Creator: Sugaballa99 ( small action shot? )


Base 1


Base 2 ( i ran out of money and items, dont bombard me haha ) ( it has alot of ways to get in once you get there to make up for it )


Dune1


Dune 2



Thanks to my brother for helping me alot, i used photobucket if you guys think there are problems with the pictures. Hope i made a good post.

[Linubidix]

wow, I dont wanna sound mean but this map looks so sloppy. So many areas could've been better.

[sheepdog136]

Originally Posted by linubidix

wow, I dont wanna sound mean but this map looks so sloppy. So many areas could've been better.

yeah it does look kinda sloppy to me too

[Bl00D F1R3]

Originally Posted by linubidix

wow, I dont wanna sound mean but this map looks so sloppy. So many areas could've been better.

i agree but the concept is great. would be cool if it could be done on like sand trap or something :P

[DeathDriver86]

The title gives the illusion of it being on Sandtrap, but still it's different and new.

A little tidying up here and there would do it good.

[duff himself]

Hmm pretty cool idea. It does look like you know how to interlock but you kinda rushed things. The comments above mentioned sloppy but I understand that doesn't help you make a better map.

Making hills at angles it very tough. The concept of creating a circle with flat shapes never really comes out totally right. The issue is that most people like to see smooth edges when walking. So for instance in in the picture you named dune 2... the hill you made looks decent but the top of the hill has a little edge above the flat spot. It looks like you layed the bridges on the box or whatever it is and locked them in (which is a great start). The next step is to raise the flat box up a bit to merge smoothly with the hill you created around it.

This comment is all from little pictures so I can't really say its good or bad. I'll download this week and come back and rate but good start!

[sugaballa99]

thanks, i know its sloppy, but it really is hard to interlock floating objects, and without the money glitch and everything i did have trouble. I ended with 0 money

[HaloStriker]

It looks ok. There are areas I can see that are sloppy so you might want to take that into consideration.

[InferiorPigeon]

those dunes make my toesies hurt..
=//

i would reccomend doing a v2 cause this concept is nice
but could be smoother
=]

[BarkusTheMan 1]

people, come on. this looks like a really neat idea. and i don't mean to sound like i know what your intentions with the map were, but from the look and name it sounds like it's supposed to be sloppy-ish. looks pretty cool nice ideas but i think they would be better if utilized in a more complex map rather than just the dune things in each corner. good job, good idea.