Vechicle and Rifle Range

Gollygeeanelite · 09-03-2008

Rifle Range

Hello fellow forgrehubbers and welcome to my third map post. After over fifteen hours of map planning, messing around, and editing, I proudly present, Rifle Range! This map has a vehicular range that tests you driving awareness and accuracy, a weapons depot, three storage areas, and of course, a basic shooting range. My friend and I are planning to possibly remodel this map as a "Fat kid" shooting range, but as of now, it is just an idea. Anyways....here are picutres. This is not a slayer/objective map, this is a shooting range made specifically for up to four players. It's in the competitive map forums because, well, it helps competitive people develop their skills. Okay, NOW here are the pictures!

^This design was inspired by my map Lock and Load!^

THE MAPMAKER!

Cheers Guys! You can leave me constructive critisism but I don't know if I COULD make a version two because I don't have Bungie Pro anymore...

Link to download

RadiantRain · 09-03-2008

Today you get Radiants Master Review. (RAR)

Wow, just wow. The Aesthetics are priceless, the geo-merging is beautiful, the interlocking jaw-dropping. I have to say that you put your priceless forging on a near useless map.

Now I don't see much problems with the map at all, and I love the interlocking and use of second degree inter-lockable materials (E.G: Signs, window panels, and doors.) There is also the aesthetics which I must say are just amazing. A good use of trucks, signs, and more impressive barrels. Your work is true art in the eyes of any forger who takes forging seriously.

The geo-merging just pushed my further into the inspiration of this map. Your geo-merging is great, and the best of it all is that it was unnecessary in some parts, that tripled your aesthetics in my opinion, the fence walls are great boosts in aesthetics on how you used them.

The weapon storage is even beautiful itself. Wow, the weapons actually look very neat, and since you actually put weapons on two different levels that are easy to access just said that you are great with making art in forge. The map is plainly neat, inspiring, and above all amazing.

The only sad part about this creation is what the purpose is. Why on Earth did you make this type of map, I would have given this map a download if its purpose was actually for actual competitive game play, sadly this will not happen with this map. It actually angers me. But regardless the map is truly amazing.

I give your map a 5/5 There are no flaws, nothing is visibly wrong.

Remember that my opinions will be opinions so don't take this offensive

-Love RadiantRain

Y35 <3 · 09-03-2008

Looks like it took a while to make this, but you didn't show us what you have to shoot at, its just random weapons and vehicles right now.
The interlocking is tight, but its like this was made for nothing but screwing around.

Zachary9990 · 09-03-2008

So, what are you shooting at, I'm confused... Your armory looks cool and the wall looks cool, but I'm just confused on what you shoot at. Maybe add some action pix of that.

EDIT:

Ok, now that I know what your shooting at I'll be able to give an actual review.
I'm not much for the shooting range (its just not my thing, I'm perfect already:)) but I really like the vehicle driving course. Its a little origionality added to a game. Like I said above, I like the armory and the interlocking. good job! Keep forging!

Love,
Zachary9990

crazyzebu · 09-03-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Official Y35

Looks like it took a while to make this, but you didn't show us what you have to shoot at, its just random weapons and vehicles right now.
The interlocking is tight, but its like this was made for nothing but screwing around.

I really really like this map! The main reason is that it is just for screwing around. How often do really good forgers that know advanced forging techniques actually make maps just for messing around in. Totally awesome, keep making random fun places to screw around in!

Gollygeeanelite · 09-03-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Official Y35

Looks like it took a while to make this, but you didn't show us what you have to shoot at, its just random weapons and vehicles right now.
The interlocking is tight, but its like this was made for nothing but screwing around.

You have two fusion coils coming at you and two that are somewhat far away and are going from one side of the range to the other. I didn't take those pictures because I kind of got stumped in that area....BUT, it didn't make this map to mess around on. I made this map so I could practice my lead shots with the BR and snipe fast moving targets. I think you misread the post....

Bass Forger · 09-03-2008

When i saw the name i thought it was going to be a normal boring halo range.. Then i saw geomerging and interlocking and i actually looked up with a smile on my face! This has got to be the best, funnest looking, and just awesomististIST range i've ever seen! Unforntuatly ranges aren't my thing (Dawg). However i will rate 5/5 on Bungie, and here and give you positive rep!

Keep Forging!

crazyzebu · 09-03-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gollygeeanelite

You have two fusion coils coming at you and two that are somewhat far away and are going from one side of the range to the other. I didn't take those pictures because I kind of got stumped in that area....BUT, it didn't make this map to mess around on. I made this map so I could practice my lead shots with the BR and snipe fast moving targets. I think you misread the post....

aaaaaaawwwwwwwww

I like screwing

around

Looks fun though!

Gollygeeanelite · 09-03-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bass Forger

When i saw the name i thought it was going to be a normal boring halo range.. Then i saw geomerging and interlocking and i actually looked up with a smile on my face! This has got to be the best, funnest looking, and just awesomististIST range i've ever seen! Unforntuatly ranges aren't my thing (Dawg). However i will rate 5/5 on Bungie, and here and give you positive rep!

Keep Forging!

Thank you good sir! I shall check out your maps when they are posted and thanks for seeing it's purpose! *Bowz to you* I plan on putting up the shooting range pictures. Just wait fifteen minutes because the computer is slow since ITs wireless.

Gollygeeanelite · 09-03-2008

Hey guys, I added up four pictures! People complained and I answered, though not exactly on schedule. The stupid internet is so slow for me. I'm sorry for the people that are disappointed about this map. My next map will be urban themed, and of course will be the best. For now, this is Gollygeeanelite signing off. Peace...

P.S.- I'm doing homework and I'll still be on, but I'm not going to check the monitor for thirty minutes.