[Coolant]

An overall straightening up would do this map some good. I would start with the fence walls in the first picture. Other than that it's pretty good for a first map. At least it's not littered with power weapons...

[goldenknight508]

Great first post! And..... commense the review!

Aesthetics: I can't really say much since the pics are all in the same room, but if thats the only room, then, you need some work. You deftinately need more interlocking, and even if you didn't have any at least tidy it up. But I like the triforce symbol. I give it a 4/10.

Originality: Again, not much to say. I've seen many of these, and this one can't compare to any of them. Sorry, but I give it a 1/10.

Overall: Sorry, but I didn't like this map. It was not very pretty or original. The overall score was 2.5/10. Maybe next time.

-The golden Review