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Boy, oh boy, where to start. Everyone defends new members, but really with examples to go by, and the rules pervasive about the forums, I'm not so leanient. Sorry.
First off, you just double posted. If you want to add something, edit it into the OP.
Second, take your screenshots in a custom game, not forge, so we don't see the spawn points and white dots. (That's not absolutely necessary like the first one, just a tip.)
Third, there's nothing worse than an excessive weapon armory on a competitive map. And what's to stop people from either just sitting in there with weapons, or just step backwards in the teleporter and break the map?
I can clearly see you didn't test this map for its gameplay. You have a long way to go. And you can go ahead and say to ignore the spelling, but that too makes your post look worse.
In my critiques, I focus on the bad, because that is how a map is improved. Don't take it harshly. Ratings mean nothing: don't bother using them. Give specifics on how a map can be improved, and download the damn thing. I'm about done with seeing picture reviews.
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