Looks pretty cool, and the book reference is always a plus, because the Ghosts of Onyx was an awesome book. But, it looks a bit open, and the sniper will dominate on this map. So if you have a weapon to counter the sniper, then it's worth putting on the map. Other than that, it looks very well made, and I'm sure that it will play awesome. Great Job, 4/5 for the sniper issue.
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